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diff --git a/config/locales/server.en.yml b/config/locales/server.en.yml
index 6a420c3..48b1f3f 100644
--- a/config/locales/server.en.yml
+++ b/config/locales/server.en.yml
@@ -1193,8 +1193,8 @@ en:
     facebook_config_warning: 'The server is configured to allow signup and log in with Facebook (enable_facebook_logins), but the app id and app secret values are not set. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings">the Site Settings</a> and update the settings. <a href="https://meta.discourse.org/t/configuring-facebook-login-for-discourse/13394" target="_blank">See this guide to learn more</a>.'
     twitter_config_warning: 'The server is configured to allow signup and log in with Twitter (enable_twitter_logins), but the key and secret values are not set. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings">the Site Settings</a> and update the settings. <a href="https://meta.discourse.org/t/configuring-twitter-login-for-discourse/13395" target="_blank">See this guide to learn more</a>.'
     github_config_warning: 'The server is configured to allow signup and log in with GitHub (enable_github_logins), but the client id and secret values are not set. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings">the Site Settings</a> and update the settings. <a href="https://meta.discourse.org/t/configuring-github-login-for-discourse/13745" target="_blank">See this guide to learn more</a>.'
-    pwa_config_icon_warning: 'The server is missing a proper large icon which allows users to add a homescreen shortcut to this site on Android devices. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings/category/all_results?filter=large_icon">the Site Settings</a> and upload an icon of the recommended size.'
-    pwa_config_title_warning: 'The server is missing a short title which allows users to add a homescreen shortcut to this site on Android devices. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings/category/all_results?filter=short_title">the Site Settings</a> and configure a title of the recommended length.'
+    pwa_config_icon_warning: 'Your site is missing a 512x512 icon which allows users to add a homescreen shortcut to this site on Android devices. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings/category/all_results?filter=large_icon">the Site Settings</a> and upload a 512x512 icon.'
+    pwa_config_title_warning: 'Your site is missing a short title which allows users to add a homescreen shortcut to your site on Android devices. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings/category/all_results?filter=short_title">the Site Settings</a> and add a short title of less than 12 characters.'
     s3_config_warning: 'The server is configured to upload files to S3, but at least one the following setting is not set: s3_access_key_id, s3_secret_access_key, s3_use_iam_profile, or s3_upload_bucket. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings">the Site Settings</a> and update the settings. <a href="https://meta.discourse.org/t/how-to-set-up-image-uploads-to-s3/7229" target="_blank">See "How to set up image uploads to S3?" to learn more</a>.'
     s3_backup_config_warning: 'The server is configured to upload backups to S3, but at least one the following setting is not set: s3_access_key_id, s3_secret_access_key, s3_use_iam_profile, or s3_backup_bucket. Go to <a href="%{base_path}/admin/site_settings">the Site Settings</a> and update the settings. <a href="https://meta.discourse.org/t/how-to-set-up-image-uploads-to-s3/7229" target="_blank">See "How to set up image uploads to S3?" to learn more</a>.'
     image_magick_warning: 'The server is configured to create thumbnails of large images, but ImageMagick is not installed. Install ImageMagick using your favorite package manager or <a href="https://www.imagemagick.org/script/download.php" target="_blank">download the latest release</a>.'

GitHub sha: 67a7670b

UX: Improve logo setting texts to hint that dimensions are a requirement (#6892)

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